Sunday, November 19, 2017

Describing Fireworks

We have been learning to:  

  • use interesting words (wow)
  • use describing words and verbs
  • use our senses, (what we see, hear, feel etc)
  • use a language feature like: onomatopoeia, similes

1 comment:

Mrs Templeton said...

I love the verbs that you used blasting, exploding and lighting. I'd like to see you trying to using more words like 'colourful' to describe what you see. You are beginning to use your senses. Keep trying to add more details to your writing to create more pictures in your mind.