use a language feature like: onomatopoeia, similes
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Mrs Templeton
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I love the verbs that you used blasting, exploding and lighting. I'd like to see you trying to using more words like 'colourful' to describe what you see. You are beginning to use your senses. Keep trying to add more details to your writing to create more pictures in your mind.
1 comment:
I love the verbs that you used blasting, exploding and lighting. I'd like to see you trying to using more words like 'colourful' to describe what you see. You are beginning to use your senses. Keep trying to add more details to your writing to create more pictures in your mind.
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